Leticia-
I love how fluid your writing is. You can write as if you're thinking and I think that is important when you are a writer. Your personal thoughts and insights are interesting I think that you have a lot to say. "In our society, we try to make things work out best for the person is sick is by going to the hospital. Which can help, but there’s also something missing" I think that this line is particularly insightful and full of feeling.
Chris-
Hey chris, I thought that your blog was insightful and it made a lot of sense, but I think that one thing you can do is try and talk a little bit more beautifully. Ask yourself what can you do to make this have feeling. Instead of just retelling the situation, help it so that the reader's can feel what you felt when Beth came in and spoke about her husband's death.
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